Friday 14 August 2015

Colour poem

Green
Green Looks like flowers swaying in the morning breeze
Green sounds like baby birds chirping
Green Smells like freshly mowed Grass
Green Tastes like Mint toothpaste
Green feels like accomplishment
Greens looks like vines climbing up the side of a house
Greens sounds like bees buzzing happily
Green smells like fresh Basil
Green tastes like traditional Irish Cuisine
Green is the feeling of being safe
Green looks like a beautiful spring day
Green sounds like laughter
Green Smells like a bundle of chrysanthemums
Greens tastes like a sour lime
Green feels like family
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8 comments:

  1. Unknown17 August 2015 at 09:38

    Hi Sophie
    Nice Poem. I really have had trouble writing my colour poem so thanks for the inspiration.
    PS: Nice job at Netball

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    1. Unknown21 August 2015 at 19:03

      Thank you Zoe that's so kind and nice of you to say

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  2. Miss Hines17 August 2015 at 14:45

    Hi Soph,
    When I think of green, I think of sour lollies! (Which I love, especially the sour worms!) Also green is my favourite colour. Great poem, you have really captured the audience and I think we can all relate to the things you have written. Wananai!

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    1. Unknown21 August 2015 at 19:04

      Thanks Miss Hines I love sour lollies to

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  3. Unknown29 August 2015 at 09:07

    Hi Sophie
    That is a really good piece of writing!!
    When I think of green I think of New Zealand.
    From Ella

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    1. Unknown16 September 2015 at 15:36

      I agree with Ella! Green reminds be of New Zealand and it reminds me of a vibrant green meadow.

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  4. Unknown22 September 2015 at 18:10

    Hi Sophie
    I also agree with Ella and Bronah,but it also reminds me of the bright colour of a freshly picked pod of peas.

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  5. Unknown14 March 2016 at 12:01

    That is a great green poem Sophie i agree with all of the comments you did really well...

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