- Girl at campfire cooking marshmallows
- Something creeps up behind him
- both scream
- girl puts out hand and monster nudges it
- creaking bushes behind them
- it runs away
- She runs after it but loses it
- sees a old man
- old man gives her a stone with markings
- she runs away with it and goes into a cave
- goes into another world
- sees army so hides
- stuck in that world and looks for way out
- finds a way out and goes back to campfire
- cook marshmallows
Wednesday 27 August 2014
Marshmallow bare bones
WALT: Create a Bare bones plan
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Wow.
ReplyDeleteGreat plan I can't wait to see your writing!
At the start it say "Girl at campfire cooking marshmallows. Something creeps up behind him"
Might want to change that but everything else is great!
From Nina