Wednesday 27 August 2014

Marshmallow bare bones

WALT: Create a Bare bones plan 

  1. Girl at campfire cooking marshmallows 
  2. Something creeps up behind him 
  3. both scream
  4. girl puts out hand and monster nudges it
  5. creaking bushes behind them
  6. it runs away 
  7. She runs after it but loses it  
  8. sees a old man 
  9. old man gives her a stone with markings 
  10. she runs away with it and goes into a cave 
  11. goes into another world 
  12. sees army so hides 
  13. stuck in that world and looks for way out 
  14. finds a way out and goes back to campfire
  15. cook marshmallows 

1 comment:

  1. Wow.
    Great plan I can't wait to see your writing!
    At the start it say "Girl at campfire cooking marshmallows. Something creeps up behind him"
    Might want to change that but everything else is great!
    From Nina

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