Walt: Show Not tell
The Light was shining on it the suns rays were beating on the satin The lights weren't on and the rope was not swinging it belongs to someone but who? It was Dark green it has a beautiful floral patterned it was filled up with soft cotton pillows all shaped sizes and colours And the luscious walnut frame with carvings that are so perfectly cut that it must be made by an Angel. The White lamps looked like they were made out of marble glittering in the sun. But then I open my eyes and It is just a dream a wonderful dream.
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