Thursday, 31 July 2014

Commonwealth games poem

Fencing
As I grip my Sword and Start to sweat
The referee shouts out fence,
I thrust My blade at my opponent's Chest
He obviously think that hes the best,
I feel my pulse Beating Hard
I can’t believe I've Come this Far,
I'm At the Commonwealth Games
My Family are all so amazed,
My opponent thrusts at me
I block his hits all with ease,
With one last hit I knock him down
The Celebration echoes all around,
I've Won it I've done it  
I hear the Cheers,
After all that training
After all those years,
Its finished its done
I've been crowned number one
And I shall cherish this memory for years to come
For the Art of fencing is my number one.

By Sophie


1 comment:

  1. Hey Sophie,
    I like your powerful words you used there. Did your whole class do this? Also I like how you pretended it was you in the commonwealth games!!
    This is Olivia from Otautau School

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